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December Drabble Day 9 - basched
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December Drabble Day 9
Title: It's Not Perfect
Characters/Pairing: Matt/Becker
Words: 100
Genre: Humour
Rating: 18/NC17  
Summary:  Things can be a little awkward the first time.
Author's Note: Hey hey hey! It's day 9 already! This drabble was  the result from one of the Sunday Chats in primeval_denial a little while back, about how people wrote sex in fanfiction. It was mentioned that it shouldn't always be so perfect and wonderful, because in real life it's not always so. Here it is! Enjoy! 



So they both laughed when they first saw each other naked.

Big deal.

So it felt really awkward when they touched each other’s cocks, but they got past that.

Their laughing snorts as they kissed seemed childish. So?

First penetration for them both felt like a team building exercise, each of them yelling at each other what they thought was best.

They swore and cursed at each other.

Matt came too soon. Becker didn’t come at all.

The bed broke.  The neighbours complained.

It wasn’t perfect. It never was the first time, but it didn’t stop them from trying again. 


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freddiejoey From: freddiejoey Date: December 9th, 2012 11:16 am (UTC) (Link)
This is a fabulous drabble

and I can see it so clearly.....
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 12:01 pm (UTC) (Link)
Thanks groovy Aussie lass! :)

I smirk just thinking about it.
judithjohn From: judithjohn Date: December 9th, 2012 11:26 am (UTC) (Link)
Day 9 already? Time always flies when you're having fun *g*

Gorgeous imagery.
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 12:08 pm (UTC) (Link)
I know! Day 9 already! It's going by so quickly! Eeek!


Hee! Gorgeous imagery indeed! Cheers!!
nietie From: nietie Date: December 9th, 2012 12:35 pm (UTC) (Link)
Awww, adorably sweet! Poor boys, but I bet they made up for it (a lot *g*).
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 03:06 pm (UTC) (Link)

Why thanks luv! :)

Yeah well..they will certainly improve!

Cheers for the comment! *squidge*
fredbassett From: fredbassett Date: December 9th, 2012 12:39 pm (UTC) (Link)
That's great!!!

A less than perfect look at sex is always great.
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 03:10 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thanks Fred!

I'm in total agreement with you! :)
reggietate From: reggietate Date: December 9th, 2012 02:21 pm (UTC) (Link)
LOL!
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 03:11 pm (UTC) (Link)

Heee! :) Cheers.
adafrog From: adafrog Date: December 9th, 2012 02:52 pm (UTC) (Link)
Wow, this is perfect!!
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 03:11 pm (UTC) (Link)

A perfect drabble about non-perfect sex? Thank you very much. Cheers. :)
joshinator From: joshinator Date: December 9th, 2012 03:42 pm (UTC) (Link)
Epic job!
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 09:15 pm (UTC) (Link)
*thumbs up* cheers!
goldarrow From: goldarrow Date: December 9th, 2012 04:59 pm (UTC) (Link)
*snorfle*
At least they accepted that practice makes perfect!
Love the bed breaking...
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 09:17 pm (UTC) (Link)
Practice always makes perfect! lol

And breaking the bed is actually a good sign me thinks!

Thanks again for reading!
eriah211 From: eriah211 Date: December 9th, 2012 05:41 pm (UTC) (Link)
Aaaaawwww, perfect! Sweet and realistic and very funny.
I'm really enjoying your daily drabbles ^_^
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 09:18 pm (UTC) (Link)
aww! Thanks lass! It means a lot to know that!

*squidge*
knitekat From: knitekat Date: December 9th, 2012 05:55 pm (UTC) (Link)
LOL, brilliant drabble and poor boys ;)
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 09:20 pm (UTC) (Link)

Diolch! :) And yeah, but things can only get better!! XD
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: December 9th, 2012 07:24 pm (UTC) (Link)
Lol! I'm sure they made up for it with many of the later attempts!
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 09:22 pm (UTC) (Link)

Oh for sure they tried again! Much! XD

Thanks D! XD
fififolle From: fififolle Date: December 9th, 2012 08:09 pm (UTC) (Link)
I love that they broke the bed *g*
Wonderful stuff :D
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 09:27 pm (UTC) (Link)

Whoever owned the bed probably isn't! lol

Fanks fifi! Mwah!
aunteeneenah From: aunteeneenah Date: December 9th, 2012 08:20 pm (UTC) (Link)
**snorfle** Way cute. Love it!
basched From: basched Date: December 9th, 2012 09:29 pm (UTC) (Link)

Love that you loved it! Chars!
47eleven From: 47eleven Date: December 10th, 2012 01:28 am (UTC) (Link)
*faints from the overload of hot images spinning in my head*
basched From: basched Date: December 10th, 2012 09:55 am (UTC) (Link)

*fans you down.* Hello? Are you okay? ;)

Heee thanks for reacting that way! I guess you liked!
dreamer_98 From: dreamer_98 Date: December 10th, 2012 02:11 am (UTC) (Link)
Hee! I love the awkwardness.
basched From: basched Date: December 10th, 2012 09:56 am (UTC) (Link)

Why thank you! :) I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
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