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The Colonel Versus The Sister- Chapter Six - basched
The Colonel Versus The Sister- Chapter Six


Title: "Goodbye Devon"
Characters/Pairings: Casey, Ellie, Chuck, Sarah, Orion, Ed "Porky" Rawlins (oc), Alex McHugh, Keller, Kathleen/Alex Coburn.
Genre:  Tragedy, humour, romance, angst. 
Rating: At the moment, nothing too bad, but later chapters will make it higher. 
Summary:  Devon's funeral. Ellie and Casey come to confrontation and Alex finds out more about her father.
A/N:  Here is another chapter, hopefully the last really really angsty one before kicking the story up notch. I'm a little anxious about Ellie in this one, but I really would appreciate people letting me know what they think and I can change if need be. Hope you all likes. Cheers. 

This is not beta'd. :)


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raven_40 From: raven_40 Date: December 1st, 2010 10:05 pm (UTC) (Link)
Told you before that I love this new chapter. Ellie's mourning and the healing as a slow process may contain a lot of angst, but it makes the story believable. Nobody gets over such a traumatic loss in just a few days (except psychopaths maybe..) So don't worry it might be too much angst, it's just the right dose.
And though I don't want to stress you but when did you say the next chapter will be ready ;) ? Nah, don't worry. I will wait, I know it'll be worth it.
basched From: basched Date: December 2nd, 2010 05:16 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you. You know sometimes when you write something, it feels right...but then on the re-read you really start finding the faults (not grammatical or spelling) you doubt your work?

I felt like that for a moment with this one, because I thought I was overdoing Ellie. But thanks for the reassurance and the wonderful support.

Always appreciated.
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