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FIC - New - April - 15

Title: New
Character focus: April
Word count: 820
Spoilers: Takes place in conjunction with my P/P/F story which takes place after season 5.  
Rating: Rated for swearages and slight sexual content.
Summary: Where she comes from.
Author's Note: Written for the team fest on [info]primeval_denial No prompts on this one, but it is best to read after my oneshot Two Birds With One Stone. Again as it fits in with my 1932 P/P/F fic as well, it will make more sense if you read that too...but you don't have to. Beta'd by the lovely   [info]fredbassett.  

Dawn smiled at the naked woman sitting still dripping with a white milky substance. She looked more closely at the details of her face and circled her, touching her skin and feeling the warmth radiating from it. The woman looked back at her, no emotion, no sense of shock or anything.

“It’s amazing!”  Dawn clapped her hands with joy and then hugged the other woman standing next to her. “She’s just like me!”

“She is you. She is exactly you, in every way. She shares your memories and your knowledge… she shares all your DNA, even your fingerprints. She is you. Well, she’s your clone.” 

Dawn went back to her other self and wiped her hands through her clone’s hair, flicking the milky goo away before touching and poking at the rest of the newly formed body. It was perfect and flawless and as she walked round the clone, those new eyes followed her with curiosity. Dawn bit her lip and stopped behind her. She massaged the shoulders and the neck for a few minutes, before slipping her hands down cupping her hands at her breasts. She squeezed them and fondled them, the strange perversion exciting her more, before Dawn turned away. 

“She is perfect!”

“She doesn’t have emotions though, but that can be easily remedied, to an extent. Like with all clones they won’t have the same kind of depth you have, they can still appear to be… two dimensional.”

“But she’ll do the job?”

“Of course. Your father had me create her especially for it. She is you."  

The woman sighed and allowed a small smirk as Dawn continued to touch her new clone. Every stoke or squeeze of flesh, even the gentle probing between the clone’s legs made Dawn so excited and happy, she was beyond thrilled and smiled her most beautiful smile. The woman took a few steps forward then paused and allowed Dawn her strange indulgence.  

The smile didn’t last long.

Dawn moved away and turned round so suddenly that it caught the woman off guard.

“I’m beautiful!  Why doesn’t he think I’m beautiful? How can the Anderson boy not see that? How could he reject me?! I’m fucking gorgeous!”

Dawn saw the expression on the other woman’s face. She saw how she was agreeing with her statement, bobbing her head and smiling so affectionately but she was just like the others. Dawn had heard the whispers, she’d grown up hearing their talk, hearing them mention  her beauty  but what hurt was the talk of her being a ‘little bit psycho’. Just like her dad.  The woman, and the others, wouldn’t dare mention that to their faces.

Yes she got a little angry sometimes, the headaches made it difficult to keep calm and it certainly didn’t help when the boy—man—she loved didn’t even give her the time of day. Dawn screamed a frustrated cry.   

“It’s her! It’s that old bitch!  He can’t tear his eyes away from her! I’m nothing to him!” Dawn seethed with anger, spit seeped through her clenched teeth and her fists balled with anger.  It took a great deal of effort for her to calm down, but Dawn managed it. Somehow. “I’ll just have to kill him, and his whole fucking family." 

“Your father won’t be pleased if you do. He has plans for Gideon Anderson and his son.”

“My father will grant my wish once I tell him.”

“It is merely a crush you have on the boy. He is far too young for you anyway. Whatever you do will interfere with your father’s mission. So stop behaving like a spoilt teenager and help him for a change."

Dawn snarled and punched the other woman directly in the face.

It was quite a punch. The woman tasted blood and her head was ringing. 

 “Don’t you dare speak like that to me again.” Dawn smiled through her anger and wiped her fingers across the woman’s bleeding lip. “I love my father, I’ll do anything for him. You overstep your bounds, so shut your trap or I will kill you myself.”

Dawn leaned in and kissed the woman on the cheek.

“Congratulations on your achievement. She is so gorgeous. Send her to me when you’ve finished.”

Dawn stormed away and slammed the door the lab sharply behind her.


Things were different here.

The year was 2011 and there was a wealthy businessman to help manipulate. She was excited, but unlike her actual self, she was able to control herself more.

“Remember… you are better than her.” said the woman as they waited to be seen. “You are April Leonard and you are an intelligent and beautiful woman. Just the kind Philip Burton needs!”

April. That was a much better name than simply ‘new Dawn.’

“What about you?”

Helen Cutter stroked at her long blonde hair and gently patted her cheek.

“Don’t worry about me. I have everything under control.”


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28 comments or Leave a comment
knitekat From: knitekat Date: April 20th, 2012 09:57 pm (UTC) (Link)
basched From: basched Date: April 23rd, 2012 09:37 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you. :)
freddiejoey From: freddiejoey Date: April 20th, 2012 11:17 pm (UTC) (Link)

I'm enthralled -and such vivid writing.

Great groovy chick!
basched From: basched Date: April 23rd, 2012 09:37 am (UTC) (Link)

You flatter me muchly Freddie! Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Groovy chick!
clea2011 From: clea2011 Date: April 20th, 2012 11:33 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ah, April *is* New Dawn. :-) Very clever.
basched From: basched Date: April 23rd, 2012 09:38 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you! :)
flaccidduck From: flaccidduck Date: April 21st, 2012 01:39 am (UTC) (Link)
Very interesting indeed......
basched From: basched Date: April 23rd, 2012 09:38 am (UTC) (Link)
diolch. :) Thanks.
natchris From: natchris Date: April 21st, 2012 04:20 am (UTC) (Link)

Always suspected that Helen had a finger in the April pie
basched From: basched Date: April 23rd, 2012 09:39 am (UTC) (Link)

Well of course! LOL Thank you for reading and I'm pleased you liked.
pinkcat4569 From: pinkcat4569 Date: April 21st, 2012 07:28 am (UTC) (Link)
Very Interesting. How'd you think of this? I could see the show doing something like this.

basched From: basched Date: April 23rd, 2012 09:41 am (UTC) (Link)

Well I had thought of something similar a while back when I first started writing my future fics with Matt. To fit it in with my 1932 PPF fic I wanted to have a pretty cool twist.

With April...it just seemed right.

Thank you for reading. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it!
judithjohn From: judithjohn Date: April 21st, 2012 07:42 am (UTC) (Link)
Classy plot twist here
basched From: basched Date: April 23rd, 2012 09:41 am (UTC) (Link)

Much thanks!! :)
joshinator From: joshinator Date: April 21st, 2012 09:20 am (UTC) (Link)

basched From: basched Date: April 23rd, 2012 09:42 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you. :)
fredbassett From: fredbassett Date: April 21st, 2012 01:52 pm (UTC) (Link)
Very clever!!
basched From: basched Date: April 23rd, 2012 09:42 am (UTC) (Link)

Cheers FB! :)
dreamer_98 From: dreamer_98 Date: April 22nd, 2012 01:55 am (UTC) (Link)
Ooh, very intriguing.
basched From: basched Date: April 23rd, 2012 09:42 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you.
celeste9 From: celeste9 Date: April 22nd, 2012 02:26 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh, this is so clever! And very different. Really enjoyed it.
basched From: basched Date: April 23rd, 2012 09:44 am (UTC) (Link)

Aw! Thank you very much! I had hoped it would be an interesting twist! Thank you for reading and I'm thrilled that you liked it.
lsellersfic From: lsellersfic Date: April 22nd, 2012 02:45 pm (UTC) (Link)
Great bit of backstory!
basched From: basched Date: April 23rd, 2012 09:45 am (UTC) (Link)

Why thank you! :) I hope that it will make more sense of my other fic. :)
talliw From: talliw Date: April 23rd, 2012 08:57 pm (UTC) (Link)
That's a clever idea. I love the thought that Helen is involved in this.
basched From: basched Date: April 24th, 2012 04:57 pm (UTC) (Link)

Why thank you very much! :) Glad you enjoyed it.
ebonyfeather From: ebonyfeather Date: April 25th, 2012 06:13 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oooh, intriguing idea! Love it.
basched From: basched Date: April 26th, 2012 11:08 am (UTC) (Link)

Thanks Ebs! Glad you like it! :)
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