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December Drabble Day 21 - basched
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December Drabble Day 21
Title Tall Geeky Stranger
Characters/Pairing Connor, child. 
Words 100
Genre General.
Rating U
Summary A small child encounters an anomaly.
Author's Note: ay 21. This drabble could easily have gone on further. I wrote this with a young kid's POV in mind. Anyways! Enjoy!  


It appeared out of nowhere.

It’s beautiful, flecks of silver float about in the air, like in a glitter lamp.  It’s the most wonderful thing you’ve ever seen and you want to touch it. You want to stroke your fingers through the glitter and really feel it.

Your hand inches closer and closer to the glowing anomaly, you can feel the warmth crawling over your skin, but before you can touch it, you’re pulled away

The tall geeky stranger in the hat smiles at you and gently eases you back.

“That might not be such a good idea. Trust me!”

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Comments
fififolle From: fififolle Date: December 21st, 2012 08:18 am (UTC) (Link)
This is adorable! You really captured something special here :) Also perfect 2nd Person POV *claps*
basched From: basched Date: December 21st, 2012 10:46 pm (UTC) (Link)
Aw! Thank you, Fifi! xx

joshinator From: joshinator Date: December 21st, 2012 08:57 am (UTC) (Link)
Awesome once again!
basched From: basched Date: December 21st, 2012 10:47 pm (UTC) (Link)
You are most kind! Ta! :)
freddiejoey From: freddiejoey Date: December 21st, 2012 10:04 am (UTC) (Link)
This is a great idea for a drabble.
basched From: basched Date: December 21st, 2012 10:48 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thanks Groovy Aussie gal! xx Much appreciation!
nietie From: nietie Date: December 21st, 2012 10:09 am (UTC) (Link)
Beautiful drabble. And TG Conor to the rescue.
basched From: basched Date: December 21st, 2012 10:48 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!! Well...yeah..of course it's him! :)
eriah211 From: eriah211 Date: December 21st, 2012 12:37 pm (UTC) (Link)
Very vivid and lovely. What child Who wouldn't try?
basched From: basched Date: December 21st, 2012 10:49 pm (UTC) (Link)

Diolch. It really means a lot to me. I totally would try if it was me! lol
fredbassett From: fredbassett Date: December 21st, 2012 12:53 pm (UTC) (Link)
Really nice. The second person POV comes off excellently.
basched From: basched Date: December 21st, 2012 10:51 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you Fred! :) xx
goldarrow From: goldarrow Date: December 21st, 2012 04:24 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, nice.
Great description of the attraction!
basched From: basched Date: December 21st, 2012 10:52 pm (UTC) (Link)

Cheers for that! You ever look at a normal silver glitter lamp, it has the same effect as an anomaly! Very captivating!

goldarrow From: goldarrow Date: December 21st, 2012 11:19 pm (UTC) (Link)
LOL indeed it does!
clea2011 From: clea2011 Date: December 21st, 2012 07:17 pm (UTC) (Link)
That was great!
basched From: basched Date: December 21st, 2012 10:53 pm (UTC) (Link)
Much thanks Clea! Much! XD
knitekat From: knitekat Date: December 21st, 2012 09:49 pm (UTC) (Link)
Neatly done.
basched From: basched Date: December 21st, 2012 10:53 pm (UTC) (Link)
Ta muchly! :)
celeste9 From: celeste9 Date: December 22nd, 2012 05:25 am (UTC) (Link)
I love the POV! Really nice view of the anomalies.
basched From: basched Date: December 22nd, 2012 12:56 pm (UTC) (Link)

Oh thank you so much! :) I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Yay!
natchris From: natchris Date: December 22nd, 2012 08:22 am (UTC) (Link)
Aww! Lovely.
basched From: basched Date: December 22nd, 2012 12:57 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thanks. :)
47eleven From: 47eleven Date: December 23rd, 2012 12:44 am (UTC) (Link)
Connor would make you feel safe for sure. Nice!
basched From: basched Date: December 24th, 2012 10:51 am (UTC) (Link)
Aww! Thank you very much! And yeah, Connor would!

Ta!
dreamer_98 From: dreamer_98 Date: December 24th, 2012 04:02 am (UTC) (Link)
Lovely job at capturing the wonder of the anomaly through a child's eyes.
basched From: basched Date: December 24th, 2012 10:52 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you! :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
deinonychus_1 From: deinonychus_1 Date: December 29th, 2012 08:44 pm (UTC) (Link)
Awwww, that's cute!
basched From: basched Date: December 29th, 2012 11:46 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thanks D! Glad you liked it!! :)
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